In the "allegory of the cave", Socrates describe a vision of people luck of much knowledge because they live in cave for a long time. They did not know the real out world. They become ignoramus people. They think the world just only big as they see in cave. They think they can not adjust to outside world. However, people think they should got out from the cave and live in a normal envioronment so that they can see the life they been through in the cave is not normal .In my eyes, I think before people who live in the cave thought something is right, They need do a research. Don't just insist on our thought all the time. On the other hand, do not always believe people said. We need to find out if they said is right.
When I was child, I always heard adults said, if you are a good man, you will go up to heaven after you died. conversely, if you are bad man, you will go to the jail. My parents teached me that if you did something hurt people, you are not a good man. Then, your will go to jail after you died. Moreover. I also saw many movies mentioned the bad people went to jail, and the jail was very terrifying. In case of going to jail, I thought I need to do some things to help people. Therefore, I never fight with people and I try to help people as I can.
When I grew up, I realized this idea is not true. Depend on the knowledge what I learn. I realized there is not jail and heaven. There is not evidence can prove the heaven and jail are exist .I did some research about death. I knew after people died, there is nothing happen with their soul. We died while mean our life is over. we can not go anywhere, can not do anything, can not talking. can not heard. We can not do anything , so how we can go the heaven or jail. In addition, there is not a real example can prove the idea. I don not know the reason people said that bad people go to jail and good people go to the heaven after died. but I think I can be a brief for some people. But in fact, it is not true.
If we always stay in one place , the world what we konw will narrow. We will miss many funny thing in our life; If we always believe people said, we will become ignoramus. Life is unique, we should enjoy our life everytime. Being a narmal people, having a nice life.
1 comment:
1)Is there a summary?and 2)Is it the claim clearly and correctly
stated?
Yes, there is a clear summary that writiter gave, and the claim about the assignment"allegory of the cave" is also clearly provieded.
Something here i did not understand is the two sentences before "However..." in the instruction. Is it also the summary? but i do not think that they think themselves can or cannot do something in the cave or outside of cave. Socrates did not mention the primers'thought, so is it considered the sum or the explain of the writer?
3)Are all (or nearly all) unimportant ideas excluded?
No.
4)Is the summary in the writer’s own words? Yes
5)Is personal opinion included in the summary?yes, a little bit, i already mentioned above which makes me confused.
7)Does the writer have a phrase or sentence that identifies one significant idea in the reading that s/he plans to discuss?
yes.
8)Is the the writer’s claim/thesis stated early in the paper? What is it and where is it exactly?
yes."In my eyes, I think before people who live in the cave thought something is right, They need do a research. Don't just insist on our thought all the time. On the other hand, do not always believe people said. We need to find out if they said is right."
9)Does the writer's main point continue throghout the paper, or does the paper go off topic? Would you say there are clear logical connecttions between ideas and paragraphs?
Yes, her main point continue throghout the paper. No, her paper does not go off topic.
Overall, the paper written with few grammar/spelling/style errors.
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