Blog Entry 7:Reflection and Evaluation

After I read the comments that my teammates gave me, I knew I have a clearly idea.  There is some fluency in some senternces and some grammar error.  That are I need to pay attention when I writing. Concerning on my essay,  I think my grammar is not well.  I need to check my grammar after I done writing.  I do not have  problem on writiing  a summary.  But there is one I warry about that is somethimes I do not have any idea can relate to my experience on my response.  My example is too genneral.   But I can not think expressly example to support my idea.  In addition, I think I am not good at origanzition。  I hope I will pass the CAW-Text in this semester.  I will do my best.

Blog Entry 6

            In the "allegory of the cave", Socrates describe a vision of people luck of much knowledge because they live in cave for a long time.   They did not know the real out world.   They become ignoramus people. They think the world  just only big as they see in cave. They think they can not adjust to outside world. However,  people think they should got out from the cave and live in a normal envioronment so that they can see the life they been through in the cave is not normal .In my eyes, I think before people who live in the cave thought something is right,   They need do a research. Don't just insist on our thought all the time. On the other hand, do not  always believe people said.  We need to find out if they said is right.
          When  I was child, I always heard adults said, if you are a good man, you will go up to heaven after you died.  conversely, if you are bad man, you will go to the jail.   My parents teached me that if you did something hurt people, you are not a good man.  Then, your  will go to jail after you died.  Moreover. I also saw many movies mentioned the bad people went to jail, and the jail was very terrifying.  In case of going to jail, I thought I need to do some  things to help people.  Therefore, I never fight with people and I try to help people as I can.
           When I grew up,  I realized this idea is not true.  Depend on the knowledge what I learn. I realized there is not jail and heaven. There is not evidence can prove the  heaven and jail are exist .I did some research about death.  I knew after people died, there is nothing happen with their soul. We died while mean our life is over.  we can not go anywhere, can not do anything,  can not talking.  can not heard.  We can not do anything , so how we can go the heaven or jail.    In addition,  there is not a real example can prove  the idea.  I don not know the reason people said that bad people go to jail and good people go to the heaven after died.  but I think I can be a  brief for some people.  But in fact, it is not true.
       If we always stay in one place , the world what we konw will narrow. We will miss many funny thing in our life; If we always believe people said, we will become ignoramus.    Life is unique, we should enjoy our life everytime.  Being a narmal people, having a nice life.

Blog Entry 5:Allegory of the Cave

In "the Allegory of the cave."  socrates descripe a vision of a group of people as slaves that have sit in a cave, chianed down, wahtcing image cast in frant of them.  They only see the shadows cast  by the fire and objects passing by behind then and can only guess to the actual physciality of the object.  There is surrrounding of darkness.  They can not adjust outside world when they get out form the cave.  They even killed people who were want to take them out of cave.  

Blog Entry 4: Hype Workshop

                                                       Hype

In "hype", Kalle lasn shows us  that advertisements are filling our lives.   They are everywhere and they are polluting American minds.  We listen to or watch about three thousand marketing messages a day.  Advertisements appear in place we would except like buses, billboards and stadiums, but they also appear almost everywhere else we look.  We can see many advertisements everywhere everyday whether we like.   There is no way to escape from ads.  In my eyes, many advertisement did not tell customer truth about products which companies want to sell.

The article says advertisements are everywhere and they are polluting American minds.  I totally agree with the idea.  Advertisements are one way that companies sell their new products or food.  They always give the advantage of these products, so people will trust them. However, many products are not good for consumer.  In fact, too many advertisements hide the disadvantage of products and food.  As a result, we often buy some products  or food that are bad for us. 

I was a fat kid because of eating too much fast food.  I still remember an advertisement of a fast food company I watched on TV.    That advertisement said “Enjoy the best food at McDonald’s.”   I was just a kid, I really believed what this advertisement said.  I did not know fast food is unhealthy.  I even asked my mother to take me to McDonald’s.  I was interested in fast food and I believed that is the best food as the advertisement said.   The advertisement was appeared many times on TV while I became fatter.  Finally, I became a very fat kid.  My classmates ridiculed me; My mother worried about my health.  She took me to see doctor, and then doctor advised me stop eating fast food.  He told me that food is unhealthy.   At that time, I realized that I was totally wrong before.  That food is not the best food. However, these advertisements did not mention.  When I grew up, I knew the purpose of these fast food advertisements are let more people to buy new products, not tell people that it is harmful.  It has bad influence on people’s lives, especially, for kid.  They push people to buy unhealthy goods.  Many advertisements t portray companies as trusted friends.  They are polluting our minds.

Too many advertisements can be dangerous.  We don’t need so many advertisements around our lives because it is harmful.

Blog Essay 3:summarzing :'Hype"

In "hype", Kalle lasn shows us  that advertisements are filling our lives.   They are everywhere and they are polluting American minds.  We listen to or watch about three thousand marketing messages a day.  Advertisements appear in place we would except like buses, billboards and stadiums, but they also appear almost everywhere else we look.  We can see many advertisements everywhere everyday whether we like.   There is no way to escape from ads.

Blog 2

1. What did you get from thinking about annotations with the class?
       I can find some interested idea which may relates  to my experience. 
2. What did you get from writing annotation for "is Google Making Us Stupid?"with your partner?
       I underlined the main idea and some addition ideas with my partner. 
3. What did you learn about the reading by annotation?
       I learned the author's of the article idea that is google is making us shallow.
4.How may annotating make you a better writer?
      I think I will  thinking,then organizinzing what I thought by annotating. Keeping some idea in my mind.

Blog Essay 1

Qun  Chen

ENG099

EASSY 1

                                                                Hype

In "hype", Kalle lasn shows us  that advertisements are filling our lives.   They are everywhere and they are polluting American minds.  We listen to or watch about three thousand marketing messages a day.  Advertisements appear in place we would except like bused, billboards and stadiums, but they also appear almost everywhere else we look.  We can see many advertisements everywhere everyday whether we like.   There is no way to escape from ads.

The article says advertisements are everywhere and they are polluting American minds.  I totally agree with the idea.  Advertisements are one way that companies sell their new products or food.  They always give the advantage of these products, so people will trust them. However, many products are not good for consumer.  In fact, too many advertisements hide the disadvantage of products and food.  As a result, we often buy some products  or food that are bad for us.  I was a fat kid because of eating too much fast food.  I still remember an advertisement of a fast food company I watched on TV.    That advertisement said “Enjoy the best food at McDonald’s.”   I was just a kid, I really believed what this advertisement said.  I did not know fast food is unhealthy.  I even asked my mother to take me to McDonald’s.  I was interested in fast food and I believed that is the best food as the advertisement said.   The advertisement was appeared many times on TV while I became fatter.  Finally, I became a very fat kid.  My classmates ridiculed me; My mother worried about my health.  She took me to see doctor, and then doctor advised me stop eating fast food.  He told me that food is unhealthy.   At that time, I realized that I was totally wrong before.  That food is not the best food. However, these advertisements did not mention.  When I grew up, I knew the purpose of these fast food advertisements are let more people to buy new products, not tell people that it is harmful.  It has bad influence on people’s lives, especially, for kid.  They push people to buy unhealthy goods.  Many advertisements t portray companies as trusted friends.  They are polluting our minds.

Too many advertisements can be dangerous.  We don’t need so many advertisements around our lives because it is harmful.

what I except to get out this class

I except to improve my English and pass the CAT-writting  test.